Tuesday, November 18, 2014

On a Saturday morning my brother,dad and I went fishing with my dad's friend. He has a large Waka. I started to feel sea sick so my dad gave me a sea sick pill. I looked to my right and saw a yellow submarine. We started to move off to the Moana. I remember my dad saying that you have to pickup a fish with a wet flannel so you don't rip off their scales.

Once we were in the middle of the Moana I grabbed a fishing rod then I flicked the string and waited. The string started to wriggle and something pulling my fishing rod so I pulled back and with one big breath I pulled it with all my strength and saw a giant fish flying in the air, it was the biggest fish I have ever seen. Dad caught the fish with a salty wet soaking towel he looked at the fish and noticed it was pregnant  so he gently placed it back in the water

"What! That fish was my lunch!" I shouted, Dad replied
"It was pregnant, also how are you going to eat that giant fish, it's half  the size of you"
I crossed my arms and went to sleep.

After a long day we went back to the dock and Dad drove us home.


                                            by Eruera

Monday, November 10, 2014

ACCIDENTLY MADE THIS STORY🗿🚮





Bang! The bullet pierce through a body leaving a messy trail of blood on the ground. I saw the body twitching with blood leaking out of his mouth.

"Hands in the air or there will be consequences."shouted the crazy man. He pulls out his colt pointing it right at my head. He makes a wide creepy smile with his eyes staring right through me.

"Stay out of my way."he shouts.

He turned around and ran . My heart was pumping like a humming birds wing but my brain is filled with fear. I saw a dark figure is getting closer and closer making a irritating noise. The figure was a police car. Screeeechhh!!! The police car stops both doors open

"Freeze you monster!" shouts the police officer.

 "I did not kill this person!" I shout.
"that's what they all say." replied the officer.

I tried running away but BANG!! I fell on the ground and died. dun dun dun dunnnnnnnnnnn. the end. now go away.